Thank you for your corrections as always! I leant a lot!
Thank you for your helpful feedback and comments!
Thank you for your close look at my composition. I will keep studying !
I will depart from IDIY service today. I hope IDIY Japan will cut their red tape keeping customer-satisfaction-first in mind. For 2 months, I have enjoyed doing daily composition works and receiving my favorite teachers' hearty advices to my poor English and personal views on my diaries, even if they were judged in IDIY Japan's view as miscategorized.
Thank you for your lots of beneficial comments. I learnt a lot this time, too. Have a good week end! Tommy,
Hello David Once again thank you for correcting my writing.Step by step, little by little,I shall keep going.Hope you checking my writing again soon.
having a decayed tooth pulled out に直してもらったのは高度な文法ですがこの方が文がはっきりくっきりすると思いました。 appearにはたくさんの意味がありbe rebornに直してもらい解決しました。 他の直されたところも参考にさせてもらいます。 David先生は必ず英語でキーポイントも解説してくれるとてもよい先生です。
Dear Teacher David, Thank you very much for teaching me a lot. I'm always glad to see your various options. It's help me to understand usage of words widely. Also, you gave me answere of my question, that encouraged me to practice basic pronunciation such as "l" and "r", not face to pronunciation techinique like English native speaker in this time. After I practicing basic more, I will practice "linking" which I feel it very challenging technic now.
Hi David Thank you again for picking my writing to correct. In your comment, 'the images projected onto the retinas' was exactly what I wanted to express.I know five senses and project movies like expressions but they did not come up spontaneously when I was writing.It is also applying when I speak.I would like to brush up my English more and more. I appreciate your warm comment. Aomi
Hi Teacher David Thank you so much for correcting my composition. I would like to become an excellent writer in English because I am very good at writing Japanese.The gap between my Japanese writing skill and English skill is unlikely to amend so instantly. However,I will keep going, never give up to improve my English. I am looking forward to your checking my writing someday soon!!1
Dear Teacher David, Thank your very much for your feedback. Those are great help to enlarge my phrases and English skills as well. Also, Your gave me answer of my question. It's great! I got what I had wanted to. I am really enjoy to see a YouTube video of "Moana review". Thanks to your advice, I have learned different meaning between "impression" and "review". I always appreciate all your useful options and comments. Okd2016
I am glad that you made my essay sound natural.
Hello David, Thank you for reading my essay. Your words really encouraged me. I'll be more careful about the distinction "less" and "fewer".
Thank you so much!
The use of "slim", such as "slim chance" is a new one for me. I have memorized it. I think it is very useful. Thanks a lot, David!
