Thank you so much for your comments. They are very clear, detailed and informative just as always!
Dear HelpfulBrit sensei Thank you very much for your kind answer to my question, other corrections and a lot of alternative sentences. I see the way referring to a group with a limit boarder inclusive. "anyone under or aged 16", "anyone 16 or under." mean 16,15,14,till 0. I assume I can say "those with test score marked 300 or above" 1, I see and find that "interfere" is overall under a bad situation, while "involve oneself in" is simply take part in. 9, "Freedom of expression" that is a good short expression. 12, Thank you for your advice, which only a native can give me. I am inspired by your sentence below with a lot of native ways and means. "Especially important, in order to maintain our sovereign power, is the freedom to get information about what is happening now in society." I make a sentence with especially as below: "Especially important, to maintain our sovereign power, is the freedom of expression, especially the freedom to know." I hope it makes sense. 18 I love this sentence. "You Tube is considered to be a kind of TV channel." 19, I love this: "If we banned YouTube, for the sake of consistency, all media would have to be banned." 25,26, I see it's better to use providing rather than the conjunction phrase, and proper terms as "protection against those ": ",providing children with proper protection against those with wicked motives." Thank you again for your fruitful alternatives. Best regards,
Thank you for your feedback. As always, your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful. In particular, your suggestion about choosing from “their own styles” or “original styles” will certainly help me make future essays sound more natural!
Hello, HelpfulBrid, how are you? You wrote me a lot of interesting words and expressions, thank you. I like these, 'the internet have come to light', 'have changed for the better.'and 'they are not the fault of technology, but of people' 'The barrage of' means a lot of actions, sound, questions, etc. that happen at the same time or very quickly after each other. it's a good word, thank you. See you next time, Yoko ps. I guess the Japanese primroses in your yard might be a gift from wild birds. Good for you!
Thank you for your feedback. I cannot believe that in a month, the first half of 2025 will end! As always, your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful!
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Dear Mr. HelpfulBrit, Thank you very much for your comments and kind words! All of the suggestions you gave were very clear and easy to understand. Receiving your feedback motivates me to keep writing essays. Have a great start to the week. Best, Miki
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Hello, HelpfulBrit, How are you doing? I'm glad to hear from you again, which sounds you have been well. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. The 5th sentence * However, unfortunately their goal, perfect body, is an unrealistic one, false images which are created by using current technologies. *However, unfortunately, their goal (a perfect body) is an unrealistic one, based on false images that are created using current technologies. You added 'based on' which makes the sentence clear to understand. I like it, thank you. It's my favorite season in a year, flowers and fresh greeneries growing. I know It's gorgeous to see anemone flowers in a yard, You have purple, white and red one, that's fantastic! Yes, it's the time we can see wonderful rewards from our effort last year. The roses in my yard are almost ready to bloom, they are pale orange, bright pink, and purple. See you next time, Yoko
Thank you for your feedback. As always, your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful. I love your teaching style!
Thank you, as always.
Thank you, as always.
Thank you, as always.
Thank you, as always.
Thank you so much for your kind comments. They are very insightful, easy to understand as ones last time.
