Dear SaraRoseNY Thank you very much for your correction and interesting message. Moreover, I have to say "I'm so so sorry" I apologize I mistakenly sent you the message to other instructor. Howevr, I am glad because I could read your informative writing, nice sentence style, and your curiosity about baseball, specifically Shigeo Nagashima. Actually, I am astonished with you because you knows very well about him although you are American. I guess you have been living in this counrty and familized Japanese culture. I share what you wrote about him at all. Especially, one thing I focus on his good personality is his positiveness. As you mention, he showed his motivation in his last when he passed away, which made not only family and medical people, also us. I am not a hero like him, I would like give positive impression to my wife, family, freinds and all. This is because I got type 1 diabetes a few years ago, since then, I have shotted insline every before meal, and diet therapy. Sometimes, I feel it a little bardon, but I try to think it my positive motivation given by God. After getting the long term and incurable illness, I decided to restart learning English, and encourage those who struggle with hardship like me. Mixing two elements, I planned to study abroad in Canada. My ongoing goal is to enroll in a public college, and study nurtrition and culinary arts there, off course in English. I would like to creat new menus specifecally for patients. As dishes for them tend not to be tasty, so, I try to serve them, and socialize with them. I hope my little experience will be helpful for people. The reason why I though to make good food for them was, that my wife has been cooking these specific delicous foods using a variety of ingredients, vegitable, Japanese tofu and konnyaku, chicken, seafood, etc. Using her skills and talent, I hope we will contribe to society over there. By chance, Canada provides educational opportunity including internship to those who hope to study during work, aged over 30. I am 55 now, passing over the age too much, but I am luck to find it. This September, my agent will apply for the permisson to a public college in Vancouver, and if I am admitted, I am scheduled to join in the college. I will take my wife to support me, because this is our private project collaborating together. Thank you for your instructions and suggestive sentences. A variety of vocaburay and sentence style I have not seen interest me, such as "seemed fitting for the extraordinary person", courageous effort, momentarily,epitomize, indisputable virtue,consummate professional, keep his cragt in tip-top shape, etc. These new words you used are really easy to absorb, because they are living language that excellent native teacher wrote. Thank you again for giving a chance to stimulate my vocabrary. I am going to submit my writing by requesting you! Sorry for my fault this time. I enjoy your writing, and am glad to feel your nice personaliIty and vibration from this. I hope you will be fine and healthy, weather is instable and rainy in Japan. Have a fantastic day! Best regards, shigeru09291669
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Hello SaraRoseNY, again, Thank you for picking up my submissions to check. I'm always glad to have your amendments and advice. See you next time Yoko
Wonderful! I like your writings. They are clear to understand because being logical. I should have added more information. Especially, I like...'The term "customer harassment" has created considerable media buzz, seen in many places lately.' That's what I tried to say. Thank you, you read my mind and made a beautiful sentence. If I could write like you.... That's my motivation for studying here with you. Thank you, SaraRoseNY, Yoko
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Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback. Your explanations were easy to understand.
Thank you, as always.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. The idea of giving back to society later in life the benefits ones receive from society when they are young, should be spread to increase good deeds. There are still a lot of poverty and tragedies around the globe. Thus, everyone should donate some part of their wealth to create better world for future generations. I also will continue donating 1% of my annual income for better future. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you, as always.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for your careful corrections despite your busy schedule. I learned a lot from your instruction. Best regards, 5971mak
